Tuesday, January 27, 2009

The fishmonger woman II

(Continued from the previous blog)

During the long summer school vacation, when village children threw stones at mango trees laden with huge bunches of the fruit, Kalayni walked through lanes, alleys and tarred roads. When her frail figure, garbed in her customary white dhoti and jumper, emerged in the distance, they waited for her, dropping the stones aimed at mangoes. The bolder ones would stealthily walk behind her and would make sniffing noises to mock her, expelling the odour of fish heavily through their nose rills. Kalyani would, in a fitful rage, would pick up handful of little pebbles and chase them. That was always enough to send the little scoundrels to run for cover behind laterite walls and wild hedges. Kalyani mumbled words of disapproval that nobody could ever here and walked away.

Ever since the fishmonger descended on us with a hearty pressure sale, she frequented our household, and after the initial wrangling with my mother, would settle into her normal business with ease. She sliced fish, rolled the grinding stone over red chilly and grated coconut for the marinating paste and cooked it with rich and spicy gravy.

In the afternoon hours, she sat on an uncushioned plastic chair reading the newspaper softly, close to my mother, who would soon snooze off in the coir woven cot. Then Kalyani would spread her customary frayed palm mat on the floor and follow suit and their gentle snores blended into the warmth of the summer afternoon breeze.

When the breeze grew and broke the twigs from the drying ends of rubber trees all around the house, Kalyani would rise to her feet and walk out of the house. She would pick them all and heap them up in the corner of the kitchen veranda.

She then had a reason to wake my mother up, “I’ve got them all here. The pickers would have pounced on them now. We wouldn’t get a piece to put in the stove. Why do you let people hang around the yard?” Then the usual business commenced again. Kalyani lit the fire and made coffee, very strong, for her and my mother. Sipping the hot liquid she would let her words travel through the lingering memories of her childhood. She would talk about a time when goodness prevailed in every heart and every household.

It was time to go. She picked up her basket, walked away down the flight of steps into the green paddy field and disappeared through the ridges. When she left, a gentle breeze followed guarding her from all ills of men.


  1. your font is too small for me:(

  2. Goodness indeed. You have a very restful and soothing voice in your writings.
    Best wishes

  3. Hallo,

    Loved reading this piece. Reminds me a little of V.S Naipaul.

  4. It's something beautiful and good flow of language. Nice to go through...

  5. Yes indeed it reminds me of ...thousand mutinies ...v.s.Naipul. Keep it coming

  6. Next I think would be Appachan, the rubber collector !!!!

  7. WELL..WELLL..Kalyani is too simple yet very strong..
    enjoyed the 2nd part and i must say your writing reminds me that of Ruskin Bond.

  8. Saw this blog only today. I didn't get a chance to read other posts.

    "When the breeze grew and broke the twigs from the drying ends of rubber trees all around the house, Kalyani would rise to her feet and walk out of the house."

    Vow ! I was standing there, in the middle of the Rubber trees with wind blowing in my ears and twigs falling all around me.

    Beautiful writing. Waiting for more.
    (I hope you remember me)